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731630 No.17862   [Reply]

Collected in Dark, Marsh, Nightwood. 32 pages.

Public raw (do not use): http://www.mediafire.com/download/623tw7os1wf1hsu/sakamoto-yh33.rar
HQ editing raw will be available on request.

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>> No.19606  

>>19604
It's the collection's name: Dark, Marsh, Nightwood.

>> No.19607  

>>19606

Thanks.

>> No.19619  
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What's this say?

>> No.19620  

>>19619
The English text under it is the translation, 滅亡惑星 Downfall Planet.

>> No.19621  

>>19620

Ohhhh haha thanks. Would you (or anyone) like me to clean either text and put it in another font?



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3441869 No.14802   [Reply]

36 pages
http://www.mediafire.com/download/jdupn93ks07kzho/COCYTUS04.zip

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>> No.19592  

>>19590
I think your second suggestion is right. 前向きに取れる is 'be interpretable (be able to take it) optimistically'.

希望を持つような is 'in the way that she is hopeful, she will......' so you get:

Itsuki, being hopeful, / may interpret it optimistically, but it should (still) be all right to give an ambiguous reply, right?

>> No.19594  
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>>19592

Thank for looking at it. I actually just heard back from a Japanese friend who said the same thing.

This bit has driven me crazy, what with the multiple points of ambiguity. Lets go with this then.

>> No.19610  

>>19589

How naive my past week self was into thinking I wouldn't spend a whole week trying to redraw stuff, I now cringe after seeing my drawings.

>> No.19611  

>>19610
It looks good. I just found one thing, a line that should be on 105 is moved to 106, and the one that should be on 106 is gone.

Page 105
Bottom Right Panel
ADD:
It's been three years since I first noticed Ituski's feelings for me.

Bottom Left Panel
ADD:
I've been hoping she might even confess to me on this trip.

Page 106
Right Panel
DELETE
[Right Text]
It's been three years since I first noticed Ituski's feelings for me.
[Left Text]
I've been hoping she might even confess to me on this trip.

ADD
[Right Text]
Once she finally asks me out, I'll have to deal with the question of whether to accept or not, but...
[Left Text]
I've decided not to dwell on that part.

>> No.19618  

>>19611

Ah thanks, forgot about the chunk of text.



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563970 No.18609   [Reply]

Raw by jhshrb.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/pua5wp4trbfap6u/siroganegymnasium_1.zip

Two-volume series.

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>> No.19446  

>>19444
Okay. I will fix that later. Anything else?

>> No.19449  

>>19444

>Fiona is stating that she had the ability to abandon anything, not that she would have chosen to if it had come to that.

Okay, that makes more sense.

>>19442

-pg26
-panel 1
remove comma

Also make the changes Multiball mentioned, and it should be good.

>> No.19450  

Silver Gymnasium 1 - Chapter 1 (in QC) v3
http://www.mediafire.com/download/3uo5jbjy0usyvp2

>> No.19451  

>>19450
Released.

>> No.19617  

I'm back to work on this. I will post chapter 2 soon.



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420216 No.19605   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/wdsuxyxxd33wgxd

Some of those one-shots are twisted. One was already done by Yuri Project, it's "Your Fault."

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>> No.19612  

>>19608
You always want that which belongs to others, right?
So before I know it I'm flirting with another girl.
And once I have them, they're no longer enough.
...
Disappointed?
But it can't be helped.
Because that's just who I am.
And if it makes you that mad...
you probably
already fell in love with me.
Your Fault.
>>19609
I wanted to do an NTR story from both points of view. I wrote a bit frantic and some parts could have been better, but I learned from it.
That's how it came about.
I've started to notice a pattern in my own works of "we'll never be able to go back to the way we were before." I wonder why that is. It's not exactly my favorite framework for a story, so I'll be watchful of it going forward.

>> No.19613  

>>19612
Thanks. I can edit this pages so we can add them.

>> No.19614  
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Done.

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>>19614

>> No.19616  

>>19615
Thanks, I updated the release post on the homepage with it and sent an update request to Dynasty.



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183356 No.19603   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/7ldd95kccoudr4o



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709852 No.19473   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/ta9yg3wg9vsdqiv

This is the missing bonus chapter from New Edition.

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>> No.19596  
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Here's some TLC. Let me know if you have any questions or want any explanations.

I could do the afterword, too, if you would like. There's also a bonus page after the afterword (pg 178). If you're not planning on translating that, I would be willing.

>> No.19597  

>>19595
page 171

>Later -> Next Day

A later date
(it's 後日)

page 173
What do you want to do for dinner? =>
What are you doing for dinner?

>Should I make it? -> Should we make something?

This should be 'I', because she's offering and she does it for her in the past.

>> No.19599  

>>19596

>I could do the afterword, too

Please do so. It took me a lot of time to translate since I need to rely a lot on dictionary.
I'll start with the editing right away.

>> No.19601  
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Here you go

>> No.19602  

>>19601
Page 2, panel 2
She's saying she can't let her.

>Then, there's no way I could keep being—

Then, there's no way I could let you continue as—



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3012910 No.14796   [Reply]

http://www.mediafire.com/download/zjc0j5aucop6zjf/COCYTUS05.zip

>> No.14806  
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Inner cover, Moratorium part. ED version in color page archive at >>9523

>> No.14839  

Thank you very much!!! was looking for this for some time now. Is this a finished work or still on going?

>> No.19457  
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Okay, here's the end. Was a fun little series: jealousy, manipulation, understanding someone too well. Very Kodama Naoko.

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Fixed things. Mainly general clean-up.



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1784459 No.19385   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/3e9j9yzb50y8y13

This is a really interesting manga based on the author's own life.

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>> No.19396  

>>19395
What they said. Also the raws for the pixiv chapters weren't really that polished in my opinnion. Editing was fine, though.

Well all right, as soon as Multiball's done with some translations I'd love to do some editing.

>> No.19397  

>>19395
What they said. Also the raws for the pixiv chapters weren't really that polished in my opinnion. Editing was fine.

Well all right, as soon as Multiball's done with some translations I'd love to do some editing.

>> No.19413  

It does look like the existing translations wouldn't fit nicely into the current book's format. As far as I can tell, starting from scratch is the most graceful option.

Gulf, if you want to do this one, then you got it. Otherwise, I'll start a translation from a blank slate.

>> No.19591  

Tetsu-scans picked it up.
http://tetsu-scans.blogspot.co.uk/2016/08/the-private-report-on-my-lesbian.html

>> No.19593  

Guh. Well, you snooze, you lose, I guess.



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2406611 No.14797   [Reply]

34 pages
http://www.mediafire.com/download/tt8pas7ljm2l4v8/COCYTUS03.zip

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>> No.19583  

>>19580

Got it, made the revisions and reverted it back. Though just two notes that I wanted to say. Page 69, I got rid of that black bar after moving the title since it was a bit distracting. Also on some of the text it was because of the font that made it look uneven, so instead I just reshaped the whole thing.

>> No.19584  

>>19583

I think it looks good now. Good job.

>> No.19585  

>>19583
Released.

>> No.19587  
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maybe I am wrong but pg 82

>as for feeling that dedicate sensation,

shouldnt it be, "as for feelings that dedicate sensation,"?

>> No.19588  

>>19587

I don't think so. It doesn't make sense for that word to be plural.



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222056 No.18518   [Reply]

Vol 1 RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/lx42ghi85bgz9q1

Happy Birthday Kari~

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>> No.19559  

>>19554

Oh darn, I should've asked before it got released, but I forgot. Well, if the editor feels like it, "its" should be removed from that bubble.

I bought its Monday. -> I bought Monday.

>> No.19563  

>>19559

>"its monday"

I did find it quite strange. If it's confusing, how about "the monday"?

>> No.19565  

>>19563

Yeah, that's fine. Just also capitalize the M.

>> No.19581  

Done.
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/ij44q2r3t2zqxq3/AAB9H3LQEYxi9Epq-CYGY3Sya?dl=0

>> No.19582  

>>19581
Mega link is updated.



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