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879753 No.21174  

http://www.mediafire.com/file/tmgmdv9891a35n8/%5BGotou_Yuuki%5D_missing_rink_siderina.rar
https://www.mediafire.com/file/240h3r73rk12lyp/%5BGotou%20Yuuki%5D%20missing%20rink%20sidesyuri.rar

Two-part story: missing rink side:rina (28 pages) / missing rink side:syuri (12 pages). Raws from: >>20925

>> No.21394  

I'd like to translate this if anyone is interested in editing.

>> No.21521  

>>21394
I can do it.

>> No.21537  
File: Missing Rink Side Rina Translation.txt -(35106 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

>>21521

Here's the first part

>> No.21571  
File: Missing Rink Side Syuri Translation.txt -(11324 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

And here's the second part.

>> No.21575  

>>21537
It's missing one bubble from the bottom right panel on page 491.

>> No.21576  

>>21575

Oops, here.

>す すみません
>I— I'm sorry.
>> No.21578  

http://www.mediafire.com/file/1ac02hd9vn9dfh7/missing_rink_side_rina.rar

>> No.21584  

>>21578

It all looks good.

Just one thing. I think on page 518 "I wonder why..." would be better as "What happened—"

>> No.21608  

>>21578
Don't forget the credits page.

>> No.21613  

>>21584
>>21608
http://www.mediafire.com/file/1ac02hd9vn9dfh7/missing_rink_side_rina.rar

>> No.21614  

>>21613
Released.

>> No.21633  

>>21571
http://www.mediafire.com/file/4f7n9ad84u9f7tx/missing_ring_side_shuri.rar

>> No.21634  

>>21633

Page 524, bottom right panel

>She's telling me to get go practice even though I can't swim!

change to

>She's telling me to go practice even though I can't swim!

Everything else looks fine.

>> No.21635  

>>21634
http://www.mediafire.com/file/4f7n9ad84u9f7tx/missing_ring_side_shuri.rar

>> No.21641  

>>21635

this looks fine to me.

>> No.21644  

>>21635
Released.



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