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131372 No.17059  


From Momono Moto's Pixiv. 6 chapters so far, the latest being posted on 3/7/15. I can upload them by chapter in MediaFire if anyone needs it.

I'll edit.

>> No.17090  

Might do this.

>> No.17091  
File: ame1.txt -(852 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.

Chapter 1

>> No.17101  

Hi! We're almost done with it, including the 4koma. Maybe a tlc, and a review on the editing. jrdp_18 has been grilling me with the fonts though.


>> No.17102  
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QC for ch1 and ch2.

QC for all chapters:

Try to imitate the typesetting of the SFX.
Avoid vertical dialogue/SFX.
Center all the dialogue.
Check for dust and random black pixels.

I'm not a big fan of your font choices (especially the dialogue font) to be honest but I really can't stop you from choosing what you want. Please do try to make the typesetting at least a bit close to what the author originally intended them to look like.

>> No.17103  
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...like this.

>> No.17104  

But then again, that's just my personal opinion on how the typesetting should look like. Consistent font faces, making the title page easier to look at.

>> No.18687  

I'm assuming the editor's dead?

>> No.18688  

Alive, but busy.

>> No.18691  

Thanks for at least letting us know. Good luck with everything.

>> No.21422  

I can edit this, if it's okay with the original editor.

>> No.21423  

same here I can clean and typeset

>> No.21425  

I just finished chapter 1 so perhaps you can do the next chapters. I saw that the original editor translated chapters 1-6. Chapter 1's translation is a bit different than kamyu's translation tho.

Chapter 1: https://tinyurl.com/y7ctghuo
v2: https://tinyurl.com/y98o6p9m
It's missing a sfx on page 05 because it wasn't translated. I uploaded a second version with the pages resized since the pages are quite small, I applied smart sharpen to see if could mantain the quality. I'll let it to the quality checker to decide which to use.

>> No.21427  

Are you Bushisobu or a different anon?

>> No.21428  

Different anon.


>> No.21432  

The たっ SFX is Step.

Page 3
Well, that's true. I am your homeroom teacher. =>
Well, that's not totally true. I am your homeroom teacher.

Don't forget to add a credits page.

>> No.21434  

Are you gonna use 620x863 or 862x1200?

>> No.21439  

I prefer the 862x1200.

>> No.21440  


I'll let the next chapters' editing for the other anon who offered.

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>> No.21459  
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Whoever wants to edit this, go for it. I posted this 2 years ago when I wasn't busy yet with uni. I can still help QC.

Here's the entire series on Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/user/36527/series/10539

There's only been 4 chapters (Ch 7~10) released in the past 2 years though. At least it's not over yet, I guess.

>> No.21463  

Up to chapter 13 has been released through events. Using Google on her Twitter says that should be the last but I can't be sure unless I see a copy myself.

Please continue it. Looks like the anon on /u/ is MIA again.

>> No.21469  

Here are chapters 2 and 3:

I used kooriou's translation >>17101 but chapter 2 is missing a floating text on the second panel of page one and a sfx from the third panel; a floating text in the middle panel of page 3.

>> No.21472  
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>> No.21473  
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To add, please review your text shaping. I'm too lazy to point them out one-by-one. Picture is an example. Thanks.

>> No.21475  


>> No.21483  

ch 2

pg 2: leave the original sfx on the 3rd panel
pg 3: "concerned of" -> "concerned about"

Everything else looks fine.

>> No.21489  

Someone still needs to TLC Kanou's thoughts on page 02.png of chapter 2.

I think someone should TLC chapters 4-6. I was typesetting chapter 5 and some stuff sound off.

>> No.21491  
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Here, some mistakes on pages 1 and 2, everything else looks fine.

>> No.21498  


>> No.21499  


>> No.21501  
File: The Rain and the Other Side of You Chapter 4 TLC.txt -(3444 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.


Here's chapter 4 TLC. There are enough errors that I'll go over the others also.

>> No.21502  

Thanks for the TLC, schuyguy.

Here's chapter 4: http://www.mediafire.com/file/ov6v7d9piib8p6k/%5BMomono_Moto%5D_The_Rain_and_the_Other_Side_of_You_ch4.rar

>> No.21504  
File: The Rain and the Other Side of You Chapter 5 TLC.txt -(3676 B, 0x0) Thumbnail displayed, click image for full size.


Here's 5

>> No.21505  

What's that sfx near the tea on page 3? I can't read that in the english version.

>> No.21506  

It's also missing a sfx in the third panel of pg 2, one in the second panel of pg 10 and another one in the last panel of pg 12.

>> No.21507  
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>> No.21509  


page 3 near the tea is カチャン "clack" or "clatter"
page 2 panel 3 パタン which is "shut"
page 10 panel 2 is ガリッ which is "grab"
page 12 is ガチャン which is "click" or "open"

>> No.21510  
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And here's TLC for 6.

>> No.21511  


Chapter 5: http://www.mediafire.com/file/aavddb455cad77c/%5BMomono_Moto%5D_The_Rain_and_the_Other_Side_of_You_ch5.rar

>> No.21512  

Credits: https://i.imgur.com/mw84prY.png

>> No.21513  

Chapter 6: http://www.mediafire.com/file/ii8ro93ywpfj97y/%5BMomono_Moto%5D_The_Rain_and_the_Other_Side_of_You_ch6.rar

>> No.21514  
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>> No.21518  

Kurt, are chapters 4-6 ready for release?

>> No.21519  

Can you make a credits page for chapter 4?

>> No.21520  

I already did. >>21512

>> No.21522  

All right, they look good so I'll release them.

>> No.21523  


>> No.21529  
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ch 5, pg 18 has an error, "you're face" should be, "your face"

>> No.21532  
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Fixed it.

We need a translator for chapters 7-10.

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