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3864247 No.13947  

Scans by WeatheredPeach.
22 pages.

>> No.13948  
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Chapter 1 translation.

>> No.14921  

im willing to edit this one

>> No.14959  


>> No.14986  

Thank you. I think there's only one more chapter that was in Hirari 13 (there were none in Hirari 14). When I've translated it I'll make a thread.

Page 7
Last panel. The あ is part of the scream, so you can extend the "Uwaaaaah!" all the way there.

Page 8
/tsundere/ <-- render it italic without //

Page 13
"nothin / g" -> "nothing"

Page 18
/got/ <-- render it bold without //

>> No.14991  

Great, thanks!
here's the link to the updated pages: http://www.mediafire.com/download/0ag59yb7x7fccxr/Tsubakuma-chap1-for_QC-2.zip

>> No.15102  

Thank you! Some general comments before we bother with details:

The leveling is pretty inconsistent. Some pages are fine, some have weak blacks, some are really overleveled.

SFX are also really inconsistent. You went through the effort to do some difficult redraws and then skipped ones that are on a blank background. Why?

If you choose to del-ray sfx, don't put the translations on top of the original, it just looks messy.

Also, chose a baseline font size and stick with it, except for emphasis when the original does so. Otherwise you'll get cases like pg 8, where the shouting hysterical girl has smaller text than the calm dad.

>> No.19537  
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I'll translate chapter 2 (final?) if someone wants to edit.

Chapter 2 raws: https://mega.nz/#!zJR2BQJR!Q6J3pdQogtDe1ZHvsy0onqhuOKFY2hkaJAmty50Uyos

>> No.20146  

I can pick up on chapter 2, if someone is translating it.

>> No.20155  

Thanks, I'll start on it soon. And the series apparently continued in Monthly Action.

>> No.20157  

Okay, I'll start cleaning chapter 2 to speed up the process. If there are more raws to the rest of the chapters, I'll be happy to continue the series.

>> No.20296  
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Here's the translation.

>> No.20317  

Thanks, I'll finish as soon as I can.

>> No.21154  

show more muscles

>> No.21155  

>>20157 volume 1

>> No.21290  

wow!! thank you!! is this all of it or will there be more? you guys showed more muscle!! thank you! Will the muscular maid be getting a female love interest? Maybe with the little girl's teacher. Or the little girl has a female bully, and the bully's mom has it in for the muscular maid. Maybe the bully's mom lores the muscular maid to a location at night where the muscular maid takes on all the Old moms who are jealous. But ends up losing to all the moms in a fight only to be left on the ground stripped down to her underwear with all of her muscles fully exposed for the bully's mom's viewing pleasure. You guys are doing a great job and deserve to get paid for this stuff

>> No.21291  

Here are some preview images of volume 2:


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