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251904 No.21096   [Reply]

Official site with raws: http://ganma.jp/catulus
Dynasty page: https://dynasty-scans.com/series/catulus_syndrome

The first 6 chapters of this were finished on /u/ and are on dynasty. I translated up to 9 before losing interest, so I figured I'd at least leave the scripts for 7-9 here for anyone who would like to edit them. Chapter 8 at least brings the first arc to a close.

Chapter 7: www.mediafire.com/file/msvhvs2c2e69mj5/
Chapter 8: http://www.mediafire.com/file/9pawhwo55jbdeiy/
Chapter 9: http://www.mediafire.com/file/53n4hw44jbl0e5y/

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654729 No.5801   [Reply]

This is a collection of Saki stories, some of them already translated.

Part 1: http://dynasty-scans.com/reader/chapters/kaju_x_momo

Part 2: http://dynasty-scans.com/reader/chapters/tsuruga_gakuen_umi_ni_iku

Part 3: http://www.mediafire.com/?dg7juv0d6fj27nm

Part 4: http://www.mediafire.com/?wxxdy28yvtzzg80

Part 5: http://www.mediafire.com/?n07pmho75bn5049

Part 6: http://www.mediafire.com/?ou78o4a7oda28gt

Part 7: http://www.mediafire.com/?qs3c0efnpgw8d24

Part 8: http://dynasty-scans.com/reader/chapters/ikecap

Part 9: http://www.mediafire.com/?acx83lirb59cfj4

Covers: http://www.mediafire.com/?m15cgt7aceo7803

Since I didn't scan every story the file names are NOT indicative of the page's numbering.

It's nice that the average doujinshi is printed on high-quality, smooth, properly bleached paper. Except for that dust is so much more visible.

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>> No.21078  



The truth is- (Is this a hyphen? It looks a little short to be an emdash. Try setting the character width for the hyphen to 200% [assuming you're using Photoshop].)


Panel 4: Replace the vertical line in the balloon in the upper-right with an ellipsis.


What's making me feel so floaty? (The one-word line "so" sticks out like a sore thumb, but I'm not sure what you could do about it. Would it look better if every word was on its own line ["What's/making/me/feel/so/floaty"]?)


Seeing this on the page, this looks a little weird to me. I would try putting more space between the two lines, or making the first letter of "buoyed" lowercase. Maybe both.


It's harder than you might think..! -> It's harder than you might think...! (three periods in ellipsis)

enough already. -> Enough, already. (capitalize "Enough," add comma)

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So here are some options for the text on page 10. I think all of it looks pretty weird considering the tight space given. I actually had to make the size of the box bigger, otherwise the text would have been really small. (I did the same with the box on the same page.) So if you wanted it all on different lines, we can go with the second option. Or if you wanted it at least somewhat symmetrical, then there's the third option.

>> No.21080  


Yeah, I think we're doomed to choose the least bad of bad options here. Personally, I like option two better than the other options. With the "me" on its own line as well, the "so" at least has a little company, and doesn't look /quite/ as out-of-place. Putting the "me" on its own line but "so" on the same line as "feel" strikes me as too hourglassy.

So even though it's not great, I think one word per line may be our best option here.

>> No.21081  


Got it.


I changed the hyphens on page 1 and 12 to emdashes. I also added a comma to page 14.

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792929 No.15233   [Reply]

[Kiyota Tomo] That Flowers May Bloom
24 pages
Scans by WeatheredPeach.

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>> No.21057  

page 1
"And I'm the club's advisor" is hard to read. Maybe a light gray shadow/outline?

pg 4, panel 1
ザザーー - Sha-shaaa

pg 6, panel 2
あ そう - Ah, all right.

pg 9, panel 3
ザッ - Step

pg 22, panel 3
すん - Calm

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So I just noticed part of the black border at the top right corner of the first page that I forgot to erase. Here's the cleaner version. Sorry about that.

>> No.21074  

No problem. Homepage updated and I sent an update request to Dynasty.

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3693222 No.6275   [Reply]

18 Pages, oneshot
ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?vx2osh6nb62k97o

No clue what the title is supposed to mean (veggie table lilac? Huh?) so I went with the (questionable) romanization on the title page.

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>> No.21044  

Yeah, I'll do it right away.

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>"It's promise"

"It's a promise" is missing "a".

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143016 No.20885   [Reply]

I'm putting this here if anyone wants to take a stab at it. I dunno if CXC will ever release the rest; they might answer their fellow scanlators.

*public raws

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>> No.21028  

Everything looks good.

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there is an error in pg 08, "You don't have come back on Monday," should be "You don't have to come back on Monday,"

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Page 4 but nice catch.

>> No.21039  

Oops, I didn't notice your reply. It's fixed on the homepage now.

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173640 No.20442   [Reply]


Oneshot from the digital version: >>20441

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>> No.20957  

Moving from one country to another and adjusting to the changes took a lot of my time lately.
But now, this chapter is done! QC is appreciated.

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>> No.20969  

So is it finally coming?! Yatta!!!!

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3431933 No.6159   [Reply]

Next chapter of Hako Niwa Cosmos, 16 pages.

ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?ovl2wd4z1a383ah

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>> No.20693  
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Here's chapter 9.

>> No.20917  


Unfortunately after many delays and issues, WeatheredPeach was not able to scan the next chapter, and no longer has a working scanner. As such, this is on hold for now. I'll begin working on it whenever I get my hands on some decent raws. Thanks for your work as always, and my apologies for going dark for a while there.

>> No.20918  

I have chapter 9, 10 and 11 (Hirari 10, 11, 12). So these aren't editing raws? They're 3.4MB per page. Is it all of them by the way, or are there more chapters? Are you sure you can't work with these?

9 https://mega.nz/#!iBQ1gQTK!Vfs-SkAiQy_kFWHLIqkNo8nlVUsB2_sWPa11YqjHSAQ
10 https://mega.nz/#!GMwyBC7b!vIr0HmpZTTLNQZkt2cXFjfXOsnHfCL5zGvGu9GvZB1o
11 https://mega.nz/#!WIAwDCxT!4lwcylAMnHt-Y-F4EGNQ7vBC-STrKTPDry-H8inQMWk

>> No.20931  


Actually yeah, I didn't even think of the magazine scans! I can use these. I believe that's all the chapters, though here are some extra pages in the tankobon (none for this chapter). I'll be done in a week or two!

>> No.20933  

Nice, then I'll start on ch 10 as well.

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507722 No.20925   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/iqp78v5jpy2yqp8

Digital version.

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1213087 No.18368   [Reply]

Scans from http://yuri-daisuki-sharess.blogspot.com/2014/05/yuri-hime-vol42-201405.html . Originally published in YuriHime 42 (May 2014). 12 pages.

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>> No.20912  



For some reason -> for some reason... (add ellipsis)

The text in the two panels in the center row is off by a line. It looks like you missed the line:

> 寝てなきゃダメ
> You have to go to sleep!

And replaced it with "You haven't slept much lately, right, Hamachi?", compensating for the missing line by duplicating "Momiji knows!" Both the two following lines are floating text:

> 知ってるんですよ
> I know, you know
> もみじ知ってますよ
> Momiji knows!


Untranslated sound effect:

> ビクッ
> jolt


The top bar is magazine chatter. You can remove it, if you want. If you want to keep it:

> 私の一等賞はキミっ‼
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>> No.20913  


> How did this why did this what is this and how did it come to this? Ah... I'm so hap

Did you wanna add any extra punctuation to this or just leave like so?

>> No.20914  


I think it works the way it is. The only possible revision I see is putting an emdash after "hap:"

> Ah...I'm so hap—

But I don't think it's necessary. I wanted to add the ellipsis to "For some reason" in order to render it less ambiguous; she's not cutting herself off that time.

>> No.20915  


Then I shall leave it the way it is.


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