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455531 No.20361   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/uvfkzxhu8fdkflj

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681386 No.11284   [Reply]

32 pages, public magazine raw

Will provide tank scans if someone translates.

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>> No.20336  

The credits page is of the wrong series. You can upload it here if it's easier.

>> No.20338  
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>> No.20348  

I decided not too put commas on on some of the sentences. Some sentences just flow better without it.


>> No.20351  


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2979052 No.5993   [Reply]

(16 pages)
ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?c412yjtnh4l6g5a

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>> No.20343  


Looks fine to me.

>> No.20344  

Page 3
The third sentence is asking for a fact, so it should be second person.

Don't tell me she, like, did it with Tooru-kun? =>
Don't tell me, Non-chan, you, like, did it with Tooru-kun?

Oh, of course, Non-chan and Tooru-kun. Yeah, right! =>
This is Non-chan and Tooru-kun! No way!

Page 4
Yuuske -> Yuusuke-kun

>> No.20345  


I went back and forth over whether or not to put it in the second person. It wasn't evident if she was really asking a pointed question at the individual concerned, or just making a more rhetorical question. Because I put the speech surrounding that phrase in the third person, I put it in the third person, too. It seemed like the more consistent thing to do, and reinforced the catty talking-about-her-right-in-front-of-her-without-actually-talking-to-her tone.

But yeah, second person is totally justifiable, and I have no problem with the change. Just thought I'd submit my two cents.

>> No.20346  

QCv2: https://www.mediafire.com/?r52eguzfxvzb5cr

>> No.20347  


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489140 No.20325   [Reply]


Only oneshot from this issue. Raws from >>20321

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149331 No.18381   [Reply]

Original: http://www.comico.com.tw/detail.nhn?titleNo=594&articleNo=9 (10 pages)

Page 1
Please select your ideal type.
(Dropdown) CEO, Celebrity, Prince
On my birthday this year, I decided to put an end to my [single] life.

Surely not? There's even a choice for a prince...

Since these robots are for home use,
it's okay even if I choose one with such embarassing settings for fun, right?

(Left, from top)
Well-developed pecs

(Right, from top)
16 years old
Long hair
Handsome and adorable
Confirm, Edit

Garden of Eden Technologies thanks you for your purchase.
(Goodbye, my savings!)

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Her hair on the first page bugged me so I tried to fix it. I'm not sure if it's better or I should just keep it as it is.

>> No.20320  

It's definitely better. And one single long page isn't uncommon and in this case where text or art is cut in two, I think always preferable.

>> No.20322  
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>> No.20323  

Thank you for the feedback! Here is the updated file with the changes.

Also, on the last page, I don't think changing "will -> will only" in the bubble "And if you return me,.." is appropriate. From my understanding, the robot girl is telling the MC that she can return her if she needs the money; since the company would give her half of what the robot girl originally cost for returning a more expensive product.

>> No.20324  


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222876 No.20321   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/file/akyuhj6j1ct2i1u

Digital version.

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183356 No.19603   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/7ldd95kccoudr4o

>> No.20314  

Working on translating this, first chapter should be done by today

>> No.20315  
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I finished translating the first story, Candy Trap. I don't know if there was any planned editor, but if it ends up that I finish all the translations, I might consider it. This is also my first time, and my Japanese is far from perfect, so there might be mistakes.

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294257 No.14925   [Reply]
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>> No.20212  

I didn't know it's translated already.
Thanks. Will be working on this when I'm back from vacation.

>> No.20288  

Okay, edited:
Let me know if there is some things need to be fixed.

>> No.20302  

Looks good. Released.

>> No.20306  

pg 97 "onee-tama"

was she mocking her?

>> No.20309  

No, not mocking. It's just her usual way to call the seniors "affectionately".

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118114 No.17549   [Reply]

26 pages. Another call-girl story, this time from the other side.

Also collected in Saitei Megami.

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>> No.18619  

And the first stab at the follow up.



I always feel like I'm fighting a battle between text being too big for the bubbles, text being too small for others, and fluctuating too much.

>> No.18694  


very delayed QC. sorry. orz

check your character palette -

p2:flashback -
font color--gray + italicize

Waghhh! It's so embarrassing to think of it now!!

p4: missing
(She's got too much pride)

page 164
right edge -
crop more

page 165
left edge
-crop more

161 onward - height: 2000px

>> No.18737  

Some new and interesting ways to cock it up there. Changing font spacing for sfx is bad news when you're too oblivious to switch them back.



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>> No.20305  

I am not sure about this sentence

pg 159, "this'll be over with quick"

shouldnt that be "quickly" or "be over soon"?

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672362 No.16960   [Reply]

Raw(public): http://www.mediafire.com/download/y5ma7h0fn1zw8w5/Noroi_no_Aoi-chan_RAW.zip
Edit(my attempt): http://www.mediafire.com/download/im6viqh289lvozn/Noroi_no_Aoi-chan_QC.zip

I've been trying my hand at editing/typesetting this as practice, but I'd love if this could get released as well. Total amateur at both editing and Japanese though, so I thought it'd be best if I could get some QC beforehand.

Hopefully this isn't intruding or anything!

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>> No.20285  

Oh god this actually got released.

Original scanlator here. Truth be told I wasn't intending to return to this because I ended up becoming really busy at the time(sorry for making you do QC that I never used!), and I wasn't sure if I could do the rest of the series. I also thought it might have been better to wait for tank scans if one ever released, considering I only had one chapter.

That doesn't quite seem like it's happening though. Mebae crashed and burned so I don't know if the series ever finished or not, but I'll try finishing the rest of it if anyone can provide scans.

I can also release a v2 of this if it's worth it maybe?

>> No.20286  

there is that error in pg 14, not sure if there are any more.

>> No.20287  

I was clearing the backlog, which is almost done now.

>I can also release a v2 of this if it's worth it maybe?

It's up to you, and I can check the translation first if you want.

>> No.20297  

Seems like the facepunching dialog on page one and two should be about the friend and not the speaker based on the dialog on page 22 regarding the fan club. Of course I can't read it, but the context is weird otherwise.

>> No.20300  

yeah, I was confused about the dialogue too.

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