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781003 No.4773   [Reply]

One-shot. 16 pages.

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/?ua9ozfpqda74by4
TL: http://www.mediafire.com/?6915q2hkqgn5o6y

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>> No.18202  
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>>18072

>> No.18207  

>>18202
addt'l: http://puu.sh/mGli3/d5b5ef3a9c.zip

>> No.19031  

>>18207 trying to fix the qc like green stated white dots on black on each page, but should have it ready tommorow for release.

>> No.19039  

final fix thank you green for the qc try to fix as much as I could thanks guys https://www.mediafire.com/?l9hxz98c05f9nhc

>> No.19046  

>>19039
Thanks, released.



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No.15482   [Reply]

Doujin. Scanner: Me. Translator: Seravi.

Pixiv - http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=228427
Raw - http://www.mediafire.com/?hrqdgz7tq2k3qk2

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I should have posted a "proper" version as well. I also noticed I made them too dark before.

>> No.16148  

>>16118
There are still some specks, like above her head in the second panel, but it's a lot better overall. If you use a dusting layer with the settings 230-1-255 instead of full force, you can better recognize specks that are actually visible instead of just invisible noise.

>> No.17211  

Is this still being worked on? Would it be possible to release it as-is?

>> No.17235  

I'll give this a cleaning sweep, it's not a lot.

>> No.19036  

Released.



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772800 No.2514   [Reply]

One-shot, 28 pages.

TL: http://www.mediafire.com/?k9777p39a89a4ed

Signing up as editor

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>> No.17990  
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>> No.18034  

I'm sorry for the delay, and Happy New Year! Here it is:

QCv5: http://www.mediafire.com/download/88bm38k47nc7i6x/Bare-faced+Beauty_QCv5.rar

Green, about the sfx in page 107, I think it suits better the way it is (in vertical), but it's just my opinion (if you think it's still better in horizontal, I'll make it). About the "giggles" in 100, I dunno what could be done, I tried to make like in the raw, but indeed, looks weird.

>> No.18043  
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>>18034

>> No.19014  

>>18034 I don't know why this hasn't been release its good the way it is. The blacks are good and leveling its well made. Yes some nitpicks. Yep release!

>> No.19029  

Released.



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696077 No.18294   [Reply]

Scans from http://yuri-daisuki-sharess.blogspot.com/2014/05/yuri-hime-vol42-201405.html . Originally published in YuriHime 42 (May 2014). 20 pages.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/9sm0yu26yj5s34u/%E9%9B%A8%E5%AE%BF%E3%82%8A%E3%81%AB%E3%81%AF%E7%99%BD%E7%8C%AB%E3%82%92.zip

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>> No.19005  

>>18985

>Note the major pun 「いらない子がいるでじゃん」
>Suggestions welcome.

I don't think it's possible to do it neatly. Maybe something a bit more literal with a TL note?

527
It's pretty strong ->
It's coming down pretty strong

535
comes looking for me... ->
comes looking for me, an... (or on the next line)

It's not altogether wrong.
(this is black-haired girl speaking, right?)
It's not even a complete exaggeration.

Oh... Sorry. It must be annoying just that I'm making this conversation while you're eating! ->
Oh... Sorry. It must be annoying that I'm talking about this while you're eating!

536
But, here you are, right? ->
I mean, here you are, right?

An unneeded child's got needs, right?
How can you be an unneeded child when you actually exist?
(does this sound better?)

537
Uh... I don't know if that's really what "unneeded" means... ->

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>> No.19011  

I think this is fit for a release, unless someone says otherwise.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/0ny4o4w40toc3km/In_the_Rain_Shelter_with_a_White_Cat_QCv2.zip

>> No.19015  

I don't like the TL note. I think that both interpretations of the line should be presented. I'd suggest something like:

> Here, Blanche is punning on two verbs meaning "to be needed" and "to exist." Her dialogue can be interpreted both as it's written above and as "You're needed right here, right? The unneeded child is needed, right?"
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I think it's fine both ways, but here. Thanks for the input.

>> No.19022  

Released.



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3840725 No.17256   [Reply]

Scanned by WeatheredPeach. 28 pages.
http://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6eSPntFU8MNbExsaEp2eFlCWFU

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>> No.18950  
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Wait, oh no. I looked over this and found some mistakes and fixed them. It's just 3 pages I edited, so I'll just post them here individually. If I need to make a new zip, I'll make one.

For this one, I fixed the last panel. "don't feel" was originally "don'tfeel"

>> No.18951  
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For this, I just changed "It's Andou Rise." in the fourth panel. I split it into 3 lines instead of 2.

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For this, I added hyphens in the fifth panel.

I hope it's not too late.

>> No.18960  

>>18952
Updated. Still waiting for Dynasty for a Reader link.

>> No.18966  

>>18952 sorry about not spotting those..thanks so much for the updates Procyon.



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312336 No.13792   [Reply]

https://www.mediafire.com/?3t2nwf5od007z03

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>> No.18774  

ch15v3
http://puu.sh/oEjIo/c250101223.rar

>>18764
I was thinking of putting ellipses when editing, but I kept them unlinked to maintain consistency with previous chapters (same with keeping the original panel-wide ellipses), although I did add one for continuity in the dialogue you mentioned on pg22 p1 since it was throwing me off >_>

Other than that one, though, I don't think it's that much of an issue, but if anyone else thinks they should be added then I'll go back and put them in.

>> No.18788  

Due to an unfortunate accident with my laptop, I won't be able to do any editing for the foreseeable future :(

>> No.18948  

Seeing the current conversation in the general and that it worked for Kurt...

Could this get a release as well? I think chapter 15 is ready.

>> No.18962  

>>18948
Released.

>> No.18965  
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pg 13

>heirarchy


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616321 No.17423   [Reply]

Public magazine scan. 30 pages.
https://mega.nz/#!DgAwUCpY!iXyZ8eFvTavFdVqRTZ6ovXKG0-77Llf1qcctEFEaPMQ

Also collected in Saitei Megami.

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>> No.18890  
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currently working on qc but first thing first your black need to be ajusted just a bit.

>> No.18893  
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Qc attach. Markup:https://www.mediafire.com/?rsef1jo60i6qtc8

>> No.18894  

>>18880 take your time, sleep well XD no need to rush.

>> No.18941  

Third time's the charm (or not).
https://mega.nz/#!WN9VhCLL!gS6LF-BGPVejtFrogyfWXeUePRJ1WCzqbxnXxgO4gxA

>> No.18963  

>>18941
Released.



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3340532 No.17262   [Reply]

Scanned By WeatheredPeach. 10 pages.
http://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6eSPntFU8MNckRmM2lzRDByTnc

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>> No.18933  

Not sure if bumping's allowed but I'd really love for this to be released before I go back to uni again.

>> No.18934  

>>18933
Please do bump. And released. I'll update the post with a Reader link when it's up on Dynasty Reader or I get YP Reader access.

>> No.18936  

>>18934 thanks so much Procyon.

>> No.18959  

Someone pointed out to me that there was a QC mistake on page 3. Uploaded a v2, please do reupload to Mega and change the DL link on the site.

Here: http://www.mediafire.com/download/mnf81ehhnhsty34/The_Person_Who_Cheers_the_People_Who_Try_QCv1.zip

My bad, and thanks.

>> No.18961  

>>18959
Updated.



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1257412 No.18742   [Reply]

ED – https://www.mediafire.com/?6bi3y3mg78gkdd2

TL – https://www.mediafire.com/?g2xjy9qybhkbns1

Posted here by suggestion from /u/. I'm unable to edit the series, but I hear potential editors/translators here might be interested.

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>> No.18815  

There's a guy who just send me chp 17-19 he owns the scans so we have his permission thus give him credit. I'm going to check them tomorrow to see If they have the right dpi if we can use them. If everything goes good we won't need to rescan again. I'll let you know tomorrow

>> No.18817  

>>18807 what do you think of these? https://www.dropbox.com/sh/psqmk0o09kuwk76/AADUXNiYka_Cf_86F0sew_Oda?dl=0 in your opinion should we use 1600pX or scan them again and use 2000px

>> No.18818  

>>18815
That's awesome, I'm glad we're just about up to the current releases.

>>18817
Those are from the Kindle version, right? I've used images like those before and they're pretty good, both for faster editing and general reading. For a series like Citrus that doesn't have many asides scrawled in small kana, editing those probably won't give you much of a headache. The difference is basically if you want that bit more quality or have some big redraws.

>> No.18821  

>>18818 yeah sound cool :) I think we can work with these. It won't be full HD quality but we can get back to the quality with this chapter 20 and the following thanks so much for the Raws.

>> No.18830  

>>18818 thank you shadow. I will get volume 5 in 5 days and I got Italian scanlation working with us so there is the scanlations we will get this done.



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1407131 No.17354   [Reply]

RAWS: http://www.mediafire.com/download/v8t8tzsdzey14po

This is digital version, so the whole tank is nice and clean.

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>> No.18787  

So it sounds like we've reached an agreement on almost everything. There are still a couple things I'd like to talk about.

> More noble and handsome than a girl has any right to be...

The important thing now is to match whatever went out the door in chapter one. Consistency is more important than these essentially equivalent word orders.

>平坦すぎて
>It's too flat and predictable.

If you truly feel that using "flat" is too confusing in this case, try "My life has gone flat." I don't want to draw the phrase out; it should be short and punchy, like the original's.

For what it's worth, I use "handsomer," and "more handsome" sounds wrong to me. Maybe I'm weirder for it; oh, well.

I also consider myself a mediocre translator, and frequently encounter Japanese phrases that require a lot of work for me to decipher; that was certainly the case with this one. Accordingly, I'm very ready to believe that I've misunderstood something when there's a major change during TLC. Hopefully, things are now both readable and reasonable consistent with the original.

>> No.18791  

>>18787
Yeah, I can live with "My life has gone flat." for that.

I'll try to get the page in chap 1 changed to 'more handsome' so it'll be consistent.

>> No.18795  

Editor's here. Sorry for not posting chapter 3 and 4 on /u/. If there is anything to fix, please tell me. And this time I will post chapter 5 on /u/ for QC. Probably after tomorrow.

By the way. Multiball, Ichigo69 could you translate this >>18609 manga? I would like to work on it after I finish this.

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>>18795
Sorry, I was just concerned that you didn't get all the changes that Multiball and I made to my script edits, but it seems like you did. Oh, and thank you for making this consistent with the one I changed ^__^

>> No.18798  

>>18797
Oh, okay. So we are good then.



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