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611964 No.19576   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/v5ab6clkxzfuobm



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3215416 No.17386   [Reply]

Sequel to >>17329.

Scanned by WeatheredPeach. 28 pages.
http://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6eSPntFU8MNakRzTnVmQ2pRWFE

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>> No.19562  

>>19547

> If you want, I could add a subject and therefore a comma.

No worries, I'd just leave it that way if that's the case.

> I would use "I feel really sluggish this morning." Is that okay?

Yep, that sounds better. At first I was skeptical about that sentence but that fits more.

Though last thing, wanted to ask about Pg 8, on the last two panels of the narration text.
"Why is that my sister has seemed kinder lately..." seems a bit weird to me but could be used. Maybe changing that to, "Why is that my sister has been acting kinder lately..." if that sounds better.

>> No.19567  

>>19562

> Maybe changing that to, "Why is that my sister has been acting kinder lately..." if that sounds better.

Yep, it does.

http://www.mediafire.com/download/2g48m65gbr1suo7/No_Carriage_InQC_V2.zip

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>>19567

Everything looks very nice, though before wrapping it up, there are just two very small suggestions on page 9.

Panel 3 bubble 1, "I've always hated how she had me beat in..." could be changed to "I've always hated how she defeated me in..."

panel 4
"pretty adorable..." changed to
"it was pretty adorable..."

That's about it for me to say, good work on this one. How lewd the hand holding was.

>> No.19569  

>>19568

http://www.mediafire.com/download/7acbr73tt1orzvz/No_Carriage_InQC_V3.zip

I also italized "was" for emphasis. It sounded pretty good to me. Thanks for your help.

>> No.19571  

>>19569
Released.



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812661 No.15230   [Reply]

[Fukasaku Emi] Trade Your Wand for a Baton
24 pages
https://drive.google.com/uc?id=0B6eSPntFU8MNM0hxckZlbDU0QmM&export=download
Scans by WeatheredPeach.

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>> No.19544  

>>19536

Sure. I'll also look over this and fix anything I see.

>> No.19546  
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What does the SFX on the bottom say?

>> No.19549  

>>19546
わああ = Waaai! (cheering)

>> No.19557  

http://www.mediafire.com/download/oapipa759o84862/Trade_Your_Baton_InQC_V1.zip

>>19549

I used cheering if that's okay.

>> No.19561  

>>19557
Thanks, that looks much better.

Released.



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309620 No.19556   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/c9sup6ya36plwpb



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RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/k3qer3eaurosyml



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592692 No.19542   [Reply]

RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/igma4h11iiwvf3j



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3380494 No.5768   [Reply]

Yet another chapter of Miniature Garden Cosmos, 8 pages.

ED: http://www.mediafire.com/?o161l6n04p8adoc

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>> No.19506  

>>19505
I guess a more natural term here is

>Those formaldehyde jars. ♪

Looking at the animals in formalin. ♪

>> No.19522  

Thank you both so much for your help!

Here is the updated file, if anyone has further changes for me to apply: https://www.mediafire.com/?iv9gcx0oxeou5b9

>> No.19531  

>>19522

pg12

-last panel,bubble 1
You're the... -> You're in the...

-last panel,b2
You're the... -> And you're in the...

I think that should be it. Good job.

>> No.19539  

Ah, how did I overlook that!

Thank you.

Link updated: https://www.mediafire.com/?iv9gcx0oxeou5b9

>> No.19540  

>>19539
Released.



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1355448 No.2513   [Reply]

One-shot, 24 pages. Contains hardcore girl-on-girl handholding action.

TL: http://www.mediafire.com/?bqccc468077srdj

Signing up as editor.

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>> No.18468  

Okay here's the new, cleaner version.
http://www.mediafire.com/download/84jn42sspm61568/Rock+Candy+Praparat+%28Hirari+Vol.+7%29_Edited_V3.zip

>> No.18469  

>>18468 thank you right now I am recording a tutorial right now for everyone who needs more practice editing. Will check your edit.

>> No.18714  

>>18469
are you still going to qc this, kari?

>> No.18929  

Yes I totally forgot this while I was attending classe...will get it done. Hope to see you back green

>> No.19535  

>>18468
Released.



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802866 No.16154   [Reply]

TL Scans: http://www.mediafire.com/download/a42t8wmcjwxgzgs/YMH15-19TL.ZIP

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>>19181

>> No.19196  

>>19187

>replace period with a question mark
>make text smaller if necessary

I disagree with this. Yoriko is just addressing Tsubaki, not questioning her in any way.

YMH 19 Rev. 3
https://mega.nz/#!ZZwXTYAS!ATDj6qb078agAduLDZJZwmuASq1LobSIyCrIqjUNl1c

>> No.19198  

>>19196
Released.

>> No.19532  
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If it's ever needed, below are the PSD files for chapters 17-19.

https://mega.nz/#!RIYnUAwI!3JdfOTB4YUXh4wa2wOP76BXG9QRNhNJ_kFOiOB0mqpE

>> No.20291  

I removed the PSD archive from my MEGA. If it's needed, just ask in a /u/ General thread or something.



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295272 No.19520   [Reply]

Vol 1-3 + Extra RAW: http://www.mediafire.com/download/j0h2z2oxj614o64



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